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Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!

0 posted 2002-11-28 12:35 PM




Just love me back.
Just pay attention and show me your love.
look at me and express
what it is that you want to say.
I'm waiting and will wait until the day
we find ourselves together.
I've never lost hope
nor have I lost my confidence
that there's really a right time
for me to know how it feels
to be loved by you.

I'm afraid you deserve someone better
or worse, someone good;
someone you can show off to the world;
someone who'll make you the envy of everybody;
someone who is exactly the contrary of myself.
I'm sure people will just laugh at you,
and heaven forbid, pity you for falling in love with me.

If I am to follow what my heart is saying,
I will ask you to stay beside me,
hug me, kiss me... love me..
don't mind what other people say.
Just look at me, I suggest from afar,
and let your eyes do the talking
with my heart and weary soul.

Just love me back.. between miles..
and that's enough...my love,
that's enough...


Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

© Copyright 2002 Kristine - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 2002-11-28 01:02 AM


Very nice, I enjoyed it much.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-11-28 01:25 AM


Kristine I hope this is not a literal view of yourself. If it is then it's very harsh and totally without substance.

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-28-2002 01:26 AM).]

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-28 02:40 AM


Kristine, this is very beautiful and well-written, but so sad. I also hope that it's not about you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-11-29 11:28 PM


Fantastic...James
neveah5
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5 posted 2002-11-29 11:35 PM


I feel this way at times..Symptoms of very low  self asteem right here
passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-12-01 03:06 AM


don't sell yourself short...
Sweetiepie38
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7 posted 2002-12-01 10:00 PM


I agree with garysgirl its a great poem. I hope its not about you.But I know where you are coming from and, if it is you things will get better.
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-12-01 10:05 PM


The search for love will take us into the fire of despair...when truly if the gift given is not received...it is not deserved.
Take heart in your own beauty...that is the real gift. ThisDiamond

Robert Adamson
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9 posted 2002-12-02 12:46 PM


The title is so great. It is a wish and a command. And you say much about a heart's desire. Thank you.

etoodog

Smoothy
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10 posted 2002-12-02 03:16 AM


I have unintentional low self esteem and was quite touched by this sad piece. I always try to relate other poets' work to my life to better understand it. This wasn't that hard to do so.
Rick
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11 posted 2002-12-02 07:47 AM



Kristine, I enjoyed your words, thank you.
  
Never self belittle for manners takes so little
Never beg the devil to come back
Expect respect and giving with whom you might be living
Or give that strange relationship the sack

For love is what we search for, nothing matters much more
The days and weeks continue right or wrong
The feel of joy through trying, each hope one not denying
Makes the thought of happiness so strong

Sincerely
Rick

Hope to see you more!

Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
12 posted 2002-12-03 06:34 AM






Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
13 posted 2002-12-03 07:17 AM


!! Thanks for the replies!!
Rick, special thanks for your heartwarming comment!

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