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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-28 12:03 PM


Frida  (I Miss Us)

Once there was you.
An accident nearly took your life.
Once there was me.
I took you for my wife.
Then there was us.
You ask me for nothing
more than loyality.
I could only
manage infidelity.
Hard to believe the
emotional pain could exceed
Frida's physical pain.
She ask for loyality.
I gave her infidelity.
Now Frida is leaving me.
I miss us terribly.
One day we will be one again.
Just you wait and see.
I'm begging you Frida.
Please come back to me.
And Frida did.
Not because I
deserved her.
Only because
Frida was
missing
me.

JamesLee
November28
2002
Wrote this after watching
the movie Frida.

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

1 posted 2002-11-28 03:06 AM


Now you have me curious about the film!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2002-11-28 11:56 AM




Frida needs to get even and  have some fun
of her own  

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-28 10:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, this movie sounds so tragic yet beautiful, I cried just reading your poem itself, I bet I will be flooding watching it! (sigh) This is a wonderful recommendation, sweet friend, God Bless You, Happy Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Riley
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4 posted 2002-11-28 11:35 PM


** tear ** very sad

good write tho

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

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