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Too young to know love?
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Too young to know love? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Delicately play the strings of my harp, I've fallen into heaven to meet you. Too young to know love? Take them into my mind, And see colours riding the rainbow. Softly you ask, 'Grow old with me?' Our youth at our fingers, You predict i shall love you forever. Smoke filled storms i see you through, A thousand eyes couldn't capture my visions of you. Starry dressed skies unfold maps of destiny, You find them when your soul is ready. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (11-27-2002 05:56 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Wow, that was gorgeous. You have wonderfull talent  This goes strait to my library. (where is kit with that library smille I requested?)Never be normal! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Starry dressed skies unfold maps of destiny, You find them when your soul is ready. I am extremely impressed. Love this line. This is a  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i am deeply touched by your enjoyment of this poem. it means such a lot to me, which makes it even more special when you show such kindness.you've given me the confidence to give it to the person its written about. thankyou more than you could ever imagine. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
sigh. i know love. but i can only hope that wisdom follows swiftly. i too am awed by your genuine, gorgeous proclaimation. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
forever is now, enjoy it as it is here today, beautiful sentiments expressed by you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Reads good to me, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Gemma, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always follow the map of your heart with your love to the brightest constellations, yay! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-28-2002 10:01 PM).] |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I agree, this is gorgeous....I expecially ( sp ) loved this line A thousand eyes couldn't capture my visions of you. Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words gemma. I think that the younger you are the more you know love. It's at its purest form in the hands of youth. It's upon the older ones that it sometimes loses its wonder and glory. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-29-2002 12:12 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
gemjop~ Such tender and loving thoughts, and you've captured them beautifully in your words. I truly enjoyed this lovely piece.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Jamie Dawg Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35 |
hi there, this was really beautiful, and touching. keep that sensitivity and innocence in all your writing. respect, jd x |
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