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Adam |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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Adam Skies intense, heat up from cool, He ate the fruit, what a fool, Dimensions clash, in rebel actions, Sin lured in, by evil attractions, Casting climates, a silhouette of anger, From once a companion, to now a stranger, Banished souls linger, in unguided times, Faith grows smaller, from ancient crimes, Praying to ears, impervious to all, Disobedient man, now waits for the fall... |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very good.! enjoyed this. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed the poem. Don't agree that prayers are useless in relation to our sins though. Assuming I am understanding you right--of course. God bless. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting write - enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well written...and enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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