»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
One Moment
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
One Moment |
|
Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
|
I decided to venture out of teen and see what kind of response I got so here it is: wind blows softly against my cheek eyes go up to the sky knowing it won't help as the tears come brushed away by the need to own the want that cradles you in its arms tempting you closer to your being day by night it will perish till the pen drops to the white paper below moment's you give up will bring it i never will standing my ground knowing the perils i face being so young and fragile yet stronger than any of you the camera circles me its time to go i knew it was my chance wouldn't let it pass its once in never go Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... [This message has been edited by Riley (11-27-2002 01:22 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this POV, Riley. Thanks for posting it here. Venturing into a new forum can be a challenge, and can bring many rewards. |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Riley, I enjoyed your poem and hope that you will post more here. You young poets really do amaze me with all the talent you have. I hope that you get the response that you want in this forum. "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Hey Ri  glad to see you took the time to wander (just don't get lost like I do) I loved this poem, points for Riley  Hey, I havent heard from you. Where have you been?Never be normal! |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Riley, one I love this write and two, I love your critique message.  I am glad that you wandered into the open forum. You have much to offer within these pages, I hope to see more from you here. Very well done. I know that you can 'read' me |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Riley! Please post in this Forum anytime. I think you will find you are well received. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
||
|
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Riley, it's good to see you here. Nice writing! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
||
|
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done, keep going. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
||
|
Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Wonderful poem. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
||
|
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Thanks to all of you for replying to my poem...... ...shall be posting more as soon as I write...Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
||
|
Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
What a lovely write ...I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for stopping in and reading mine, I am new to this place and just now learning my way around. Hope to see more of your work soon. ~Salty |
||
|
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
well done Riley |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Riley~ This is yet another wonderful write from you pen. Your talent never ceases to amaze and impress me. Very nicely penned. Great to see you in the Open forum too. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good piece, what I like to call "mood poetry"...please do keep posting here...I don't go into the teen forum. Learn and grow, that's what we do here, no matter how old we are |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Riley, I am so happy you are posting here, sweet friend, I am actually 19, but have never posted in Tten in the almost two years I have been here for I felt I didn't belong there! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful gem of a poem, sweet friend, I hope you continue to post here, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Riley, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
hey riley ,i came here too from teens just to see whats happening here.then i saw ur name and wondered what u were doing here.guess we're both on the same mission.that was a nice piece i'll post here too sometime. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
