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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-27 10:05 AM



Incredible


you trace
my thoughts
in words
you say
that I
have been
afraid to
utter aloud
how did
you know
my soul?



I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-27-2002 01:44 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-27 10:10 AM


one does sometimes see those or hear those words..and wonder...


VAS
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2 posted 2002-11-27 10:40 AM


an eerie feeling for another to reveal who we are right before our eyes


quite a pondersome piece!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-11-27 11:02 AM


1slick_lady
Good write, and a good holiday to you.

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4 posted 2002-11-27 11:37 AM




(sigh) Oh Helen, for someone to truly understand the apprehension or feelings at first glance in another is truly an epiphany, I love this, this speaks with such clarity, I love it, astounding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2002-11-27 11:26 PM


Fear not
the soul
in eyes
revealed

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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