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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-11-27 04:01 AM


"tell me life ain't troubling.."
(rolling green of rolicking...)
"tell me I am what I seem..."
one brown ass is frolicking
through the meadow tall...


tasting velvet
(ever tried?)
it's such a lovely metaphor...
chasing
cornucopia
behind a pair-- --of French doors
sheers to cast a silhouette
dancing behind veil.


Sheers-a shadow's
castanet--
a stomp of me all wrong.


Sheers of wing
a gossamer,
trust me?
as I prance on bed,
holding curtain
as a cape
above you
singing you
my song...


let me drape it
gracefully
this sheer
across your face.
I want to taste you--
your sweetness
and feel the satin
on my cheek--
while I bathe
within your eyes...


"paneled lace"
a serpent sighed.


I took my cape.
I learned to fly.


even using lace for wing...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-27-2002 05:24 AM).]

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2002-11-27 04:22 AM


Serenity~ Enjoyed
Do I detect a little happiness in this piece?

How you do this I haven't a clue
One thing for sure... nobody does it better than you...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-27-2002 04:54 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-11-27 04:22 AM


Oh my we are frisky tonight aren't we?   enjoyed sweetie.

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-11-27 09:53 AM


let me drape it
gracefully
this sheer
across your face.
I want to taste you--
your sweetness
and feel the satin
on my cheek--
while I bathe
within your eyes...
"paneled lace"
a serpent sighed.
I took my cape.
I learned to fly.
even using lace for wing...
================================


moth anthems and mirrors....
you write it...I fly in your flame

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4 posted 2002-11-27 10:01 AM


a softer journey.... very well done my friend..well done indeed...
Martie
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5 posted 2002-11-27 10:39 AM


serenity

You could fly with ribbons or bells
or nothing at all but tenacity held

Loved this!

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-11-27 11:40 AM


"I took my cape.
I learned to fly.
even using lace for wing.."




(smiles) Oh Karen, this is soooooooo gorgeous, with your whimsical pursuit of your words you never even need gossamer to fly as the grace is all inside of you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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