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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-26 01:21 AM


History  (One More Time)

It wasn't that I didn't appreciate
all the attention she was giving me.
I was too busy noticing her girlfriend
who had already cast some kind of a
romantic spell on me.
A girlfriend who was about to give up because
she was pretty darn sure I was stuck up.
Until I told her I like to move real slow
when I'm around a nice looking woman that
I would really like to know.
And one two many times I've been burned
by women that say they want to be with me
and when I go out of my way to be with them
they suddenly have no more time for me.
So next thing you know I'm history.
But for now all is well because I went
ahead and gave in to her spell and we
shared our first kiss and some other
things I wouldn't want to miss.
And now its just a matter of time
until I'm history one more time.

JamesLee
November24
2002

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-11-26 10:52 AM


perhaps fatalistic...in an assumption that once you do give in..you are then history...but it does so seem the thrill to many is in the chase..the passing experience.

enjoyed this james..

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-11-26 01:09 PM


I like this poem.
Thanks for sharing!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-26 03:54 PM


James, I liked your poem. And, if this is written about you, maybe this time will be different than the other times. I hope so.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-26 11:38 PM




(sigh) Oh James, always hope for the best, sweet friend, somnetimes life has disappointments but there is always one true love that I know you'll find! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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