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Dream Lovers |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Dream Lovers By Paul Wilson Sleep tonight in Luna’s embrace fly among stars tonight Across the universe dreams we chase from dusk till twilight Dreams of lovers taking flight passion’s moments turn to hours Time shared under stars light bodies cooled by natures showers Touching each others heart sharing love from deep within Dreading time you must depart drifting back to where dreams begin Hearts echo love’s dream joined together in sweet embrace Emotions flow under Luna’s beam as dreams transcend space Soaring on mountains high to the summit of love’s rapture Welcome love we cannot deny this dream of love we capture Hours pass and sun arrives to begin a new day Lovers dream of shared lives embrace once more as dreams fade away [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-26-2002 07:25 PM).] |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
This was absolutly beautiful. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done Paul... a romantic write that is soft on the readers mind... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My, oh my! What a soft, soothing, sweet, sensitive and sensual dream lover ye must be! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-26-2002 08:31 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Paul...as gentle and soft as a lover's caress. Well done. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Paul, this made me cry as it is sooooooooo beautiful and I know this feeling 100% because I long so much to be with my Joanna, who lives 2,000 miles from me, and we both love each other so much and I want to be hers! (sigh) You speak of love so beautifully, sweet friend, God Bless You, I have missed you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-26-2002 11:27 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic presentation...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Miah~ Thank you so much for the lovely reply Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Cpat Hair ( Ron ) Thanks for taking time to read & reply. I really appreciate your comments & input, as you are a true poet...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Earth Angel~ Thank you Linda for that sweet reply. Even though your reply made me blush a little. Dream Lover? Not Me LOL...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Enchantress~ Nancy thank you for the hugs & as always your soft sweet reply. Glad you enjoyed...Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah... Glad you enjoyed this. I know you miss your Joanna and hope that you will be able to share time with her soon.Thank you dear friend for all your sweet replies...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Very glad you liked this. Thanks for the reply. Thanks for taking time to read...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Smart Chick~ Thank you Sue for reading and thinking this is beautiful. May all your hopes and dreams for the future come true because you have such a sharing heart...Paul |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh Paul, this is just lovely. A soft, sweet write. I enjoyed this very much.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, this is so beautiful. You know it makes me think of my Gary, even though he is more than a dream. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Touching each others heart sharing love from deep within Dreading time you must depart drifting back to where dreams begin ~*~ Now there's the stanza.... beautiful, Paul! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done Paul. The moon has been exquisite the past few evenings... Last night it was floating in indigo clouds, I couldn't keep my eyes off of it. And the night before it was almost a ball of fire...just beautiful *s M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul I saw so many beautiful images amongst your words. Your words flowed like a tranquil stream. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
White Rose~ Thank you for the lovely reply. Glad to share it with you...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
garysgirl~ Your dreams have become a reality and I'm so glad for you. Thank you for the sweet reply and I am glad to be able to share with you and all others these words from my heart...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine~ Very glad to have touched your heart with this. Your heartfelt reply brings a smile to my face...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
nakdthoughts~ That was a lovely reply Maureen I love to watch the moon, it is like love at times a raging ball of fire and emotions & at other time gentle as a soft touch. Thanks ...Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Suetang~ I can only say thank you for all the lovely thoughts & pictures I find within your poems, they inspire me. Glad you were able to see some of that within this poem. Thanks for taking time to read & reply with words so lovely...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-26-2002 10:28 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've read this quite alot yanno.. sweet, the opening line is so dynamic... it roars for the knight in you. my goodness paullie? y'make me purr. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity~ yanno i'm just a little old kitten.LOL Funny you should use the word "kinght" in your reply, when I first wrote this I had a couple of lines about a knight riding up on a white horse and all that corny stuff. Thanks for the knightly ( nightly ) reply...Paul |
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