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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2002-11-25 10:09 PM


Love forever
Ever strong
Never broken
Never wrong

Shall it forever
Stay the same
For every life
Over again.

(It isn't much.  Been awhile since I've written something.  Forgive me and the lame-ness of it all.)

-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2002 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-11-26 01:26 AM


This was not lame at all.  I enjoyed it much, and love is never wrong.  
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2002-11-26 03:14 AM


I must agree ....where love is concerned there is nothing to forgive.

It's usually the simplest words that carry the strongest of meanings.

Excellent!!

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-26 01:02 PM


Wow!
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