navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » Tastes Of Savory
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic Tastes Of Savory Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-11-25 09:23 PM




In the sweet breath of evening
Contemplate bears receiving
In these quivered emotions
Sets the dance of devotions

By the bluest of midnight
In acceptance of far sight
Well the thought painted eyes
Where acrylic dream dries

And the hand cupped to carry
In kind offer kept cherry
In the think of the moon
Sweet remembers still swoon

To the dark and the ebbing
Breath of gold beaded webbing
Well before and again
In the background ‘til then

In the sweet breath of evening
Would the night so deceiving
Bring again of your kiss
Such impetuous bliss

Remembered as tingling that tasted like this

Copyright Kkh 11/25/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-11-25 09:26 PM


ThisDiamond
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2002-11-25 09:32 PM


So...what was it ???   A Mountain Dew or
a Sprite....oooops...wait!  This was
about something to do with the taste of
a lover's kiss...or somethin like that..??

Beautifully done K.  very nice thoughts...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2002-11-25 10:11 PM


aw...don't believe Magnus asked that....it was SHINE all the way...moonshine that is, in her lover's eyes...hee, hee.

Lovely write my friend...

jwesley

Auguste
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953
By the sea
4 posted 2002-11-25 10:58 PM


I completely enjoyed the sensual quality of this piece and the kiss, especially.  VERY nice work!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-11-25 11:09 PM


Excellent write!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2002-11-25 11:43 PM


Kathleen, I enjoyed reading this very much.
Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » Tastes Of Savory

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary