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Open Poetry #23

Reaching Me (20 or less)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-25 08:43 PM

Reaching Me

he reached
across
my loneliness
and put
his heart
in
my hand

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-11-25 08:53 PM

They have a way of doing that. Beautiful poem.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-11-25 08:55 PM

Not too shabby Slick....for so few words...
Well done...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-25 10:32 PM

Beautifully done Helen!
I love this for my own personal reasons!
And for this...I thank you!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-25 10:52 PM

Helen, these words touch me too, for my
own personal reasons. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2002-11-25 11:48 PM

HeLen: may your hand always keep it warm...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2002-11-26 01:11 AM

There is no "less" in these words, it says so much more. Lovely, just lovely.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-11-27 02:45 AM

that would be a long reach for anyone looking to put their heart in my hand...beautiful!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-11-27 07:59 AM

Helen,
You made a flower of words.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2002-11-27 08:36 AM

Simply beautiful, Helen..

...believe what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-11-28 12:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

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