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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-25 08:28 PM



Silence

your
silent icicle
has pierced
my heart
evaporating
to nothingness
and me…
hollow
and bleeding

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-11-25 08:30 PM


Dang Helen!!  You do these so well!!
Love it!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2002-11-25 08:40 PM


Helen~ All I can say is AWESOME!!!
Paul

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-11-25 09:09 PM


You honor me with this Helen, I'm happy to have inspired (but not caused) this piece.

Great!

Ed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-11-25 09:24 PM


1slick_lady

your
silent icicle
has pierced
my heart
evaporating
to nothingness
leaving no weapon
of destroy

Forgive me your ending is just as good.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2002-11-25 09:27 PM


Well done. ThisDiamond
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2002-11-25 09:39 PM


Yep!  Me bows to the Master of these...that you do so-o well.

jwesley

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2002-12-26 03:48 AM



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