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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-11-25 06:51 AM



Orange orb rises
night fades slowly into day.
Dawn of morning smiles.

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?

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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2002-11-25 07:41 AM



Your morning smile comes
Makes bright the promise of day
As night disappears


Gloom

BloomingRose
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2 posted 2002-11-25 07:55 AM


Makes me want to go for a glass of orange juice while enjoying the beautiful sunrise morning.
Think I will...thanks for the lovely inspire.
Enjoyed!

Deb

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3 posted 2002-11-25 08:08 AM


well painted on my mind..
scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2002-11-25 08:59 AM


This brightened my day...like the sunrise..

...believe what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2002-11-25 12:52 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, I just love getting up early every morning just so I can see the gorgeous sunrise, yay! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always sun-shining, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2002-11-25 01:33 PM



What a way to start the day! You are such a fine recorder of nature's beauty!

Linda

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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2002-11-25 01:47 PM


~Sigh~ so lovely is this.....I closed my eyes, and for a moment I was standing beneath that sky.....huggsssss you...

muwwwaaahhhssss and love...

Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-11-25 02:19 PM


Gentle Spirit
For a gentle write.

Auguste
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By the sea
9 posted 2002-11-25 04:20 PM


This is so pretty, Donna.  I felt as if I was watching the sun rise.  Loved the smiles. *hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

garysgirl
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10 posted 2002-11-25 04:40 PM


Donna, this is so pretty. I love
the way you do these. Thanks
for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

jwesley
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11 posted 2002-11-25 08:34 PM


Hey!

That was so beautiful I grabbed a cup of coffee, rushed outside and...and...and it was raining here in my part of the world so I fired up my computer again...light-speeded back to Passions and here I sit basking in the glow of that orange orb, watching night fade away and enjoying my cup of coffee...

Thanks for the warmth dear friend...

jwesley

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2002-11-25 09:24 PM


A promise kept.

So beautiful! ThisDiamond

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13 posted 2002-11-27 09:55 AM


this one I like very much

Charisma

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