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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-11-24 11:36 PM


Sun shining brightly
with reflections of color
on clear blue waters

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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1 posted 2002-11-25 02:42 AM


Liked the vivid imagery!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

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2 posted 2002-11-25 03:38 AM


Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!

Poetry is love and love is life.

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3 posted 2002-11-25 06:38 AM


Very nice haiku Ethel.  The water, the sun and blue.....very nice.
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4 posted 2002-11-25 06:48 AM


Lovely scene!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

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5 posted 2002-11-25 11:48 AM


Genie of daylight
Turns the ocean into gold
Abra-cadabra!



Yay!!! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are so talented at this wonderful gems, yay, I have missed your gorgeous words so much the past few days, we all loe you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Shakira

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6 posted 2002-11-25 12:34 PM


Ethel, by gosh I think you've got it! This is an absolutely beautiful haiku! I envisioned it! Very enjoyable!

~ warm hugs

Linda

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7 posted 2002-11-25 04:18 PM


Radrook....
Thank you so very much
for reading and for your
nice reply.

Krystopher....
Thanks for reading and replying.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Donna....
Thanks so much for reading
and for your sweet reply.
I appreciate it.

Sandpiper...
Thank you for reading my
verse, and for your reply.

Noah....
Thank you for your poem in
your reply. I missed reading
ya'll, too, while I was out
of town over the weekend.
I sure did enjoy being with
Gary, though!!

Linda....
Thank you very much for your
sweet reply. It makes me feel
good for you to say that. You
are so good at these, yourself.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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