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wranx
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0 posted 2002-11-24 11:31 PM



You are eloquent
In your silence
In didactic diatribe
I hear our eulogy

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-11-24 11:41 PM


oh...m'yeti...

don't know what else to say but that.


Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-11-24 11:50 PM


Beautiful and simple. Was hoping you'd post tonight. I hope my reply to yesterday's poem made some sort of sense. Your words hit close to home sometimes.  I just hope you find your peace as I search for my own. Good luck.
Alicia
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3 posted 2002-11-25 12:40 PM


~Still sitting here, silenced myself. Repeating your lines and sighing. *Peace.
wranx
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4 posted 2002-11-25 12:54 PM


Thanks, all

Aenimal, I am at peace, have been for quite a while. And yes, you did make sense.
Thank you for the concern.

Ed

Alicia, Shhhhhh

[This message has been edited by wranx (11-25-2002 12:58 AM).]

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2002-11-25 07:33 AM


yes it speaks harsh words at times... silence that is..


scorpio
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6 posted 2002-11-25 09:04 AM


Silence is consent...(Sir Thomas More)

...believe what your heart feels...

Elan
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7 posted 2002-11-25 10:39 AM



Insert whisper here.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-11-25 10:45 AM


I truly appreciate the beauty of this write.

EA

Corinne
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9 posted 2002-11-25 10:48 AM


You say much with few words here, Wranx.

Corinne

WhiteRose
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10 posted 2002-11-25 11:33 AM


Oh dear wranx, so much, with so little.

And okay, I've been dying to say this ever since you posted your pic. You look so much like my brother Richard, it's scarey.

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2002-11-25 08:10 PM




shattering the silence
love will come again
to the unlocked heart

Magnus
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12 posted 2002-11-25 08:16 PM


Powerfully packed in such a small
package of thoughtful silence...

Well done..

1slick_lady
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13 posted 2002-11-25 08:32 PM


this is so painful for me to read...hope you dont mind but it made me think of how silence makes me feel...helen
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14 posted 2002-11-25 08:37 PM



Oh my goodness. The last line got me!

Very well done....enjoyed and read several times.


Warm regards, Pat


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        "Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2002-11-25 09:25 PM


Cuts to the heart...excellence in concentrate. ThisDiamond
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-11-25 09:32 PM


wranx
You are a wordsmith, enjoyed.

Constance
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17 posted 2002-11-25 10:10 PM


My goodness, but this is wonderful! Each of the posts above are glowing--and rightly so. Bravo!


Dragon Mistress
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18 posted 2002-11-25 10:18 PM


Wow wonderful...simply wonderful..
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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19 posted 2002-11-26 02:07 PM


Pain.
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