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whiskey
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0 posted 2002-11-24 09:35 PM



I sit looking up at the moon
My brain full of thoughts of you
I love the moon it shines so bright
My mind is with you tonight

I see the stars shinning down to me
Your face inside my thoughts I see
I love the stars they sparkle high
My inner thoughts are of you tonight

The wind blows gently against my skin
You I can feel in me within
I love the wind so soft and light
My inner self connects with yours tonight

I sit and look into the sky
Thoughts, pictures, feelings of you collide
I love the sky velvet black dark blue
My heart it beats always for you

© Copyright 2002 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Robert Adamson
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1 posted 2002-11-24 10:59 PM


This was a great read for me. It made time stand still. Thank you.

etoodog

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-11-26 03:04 PM


It was a struggle to either keep my eyes on the words or on your beautiful eyes!

Nice poem!
God bless!


vandana
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3 posted 2002-11-26 04:29 PM


enjoyed
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