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Simply Put
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Simply Put |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You flash before my mind, awakening thoughts I put to sleep long ago. For a rainy day? Another time? What's the reason? I know not why. ...Yet now... I feel the need and want and desire of you, and ask how could this happen, it can't be real? I live in the depth, the grace and wise of you, and ask how could this happen, the way I feel? I crave your touch, your breath, the presence of you, and smiling, I ask..... Why not? For who could resist the ~charming you~! . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Simply put... I really like this poem!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Simply put...this is beautiful, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Love should always be simply expressed in different ways every day, for suprises come in small packages, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat, yes indeed, "who could resist the ~charming YOU"~!--and your writing! This may have been "simply put", but it has depth! ~ warm smiles for a lovely write Linda |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I do believe this is the best of yours I've read. I love it! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I love this, too. It has so much feeling and emotion in it. It just feels so real. Thanks for sharing, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
regards2you Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very good... I believe my favorite that I have read from you so far... this indeed is expressive and reads honestly... bravo! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Munda, I am glad you really like this poem. Thanks for reading. Noah, You are so sweet. Like your reply, and happy you LOVE IT!! God bless you, too. Linda, it takes one to know one.... smiling here...thank you. I so appreciate you. Auguste, thank you, really? I like my "I Only Want" ...to walk in the rain with you....etc.. better than this, myself... I am glad you read and enjoyed. Ethel, you are a romantic at heart.... and an happy you like this and think it sounds real.... Seymour, thanks for the reply.. Ron, Kind reply. Thank you.... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes it's best to keep it simple...great write. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
And I smile with you--enjoyed! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
regards2you~ How beautifully simple...Paul Feelings and thoughts put to rest long ago In this lovely poem smoothly they again flow |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simply beautiful, beautifully simple |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sandpiper, Thank you for the smile. Paul, Thank you, nice reply. Dixie, That is true sometimes, thanks. InkedGoddess, smiling here, thank you. Happy holiday to all of you and God bless..... Pat, ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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