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Constance
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0 posted 2002-11-24 07:38 PM



Nurture

The river flows
with no returning
but for the rain
which feeds its source.

and the river goes
like fire burning
where it must
without remorse.

Tiny drops
And mighty waters
Come together
Are the same

So it goes
Until forever
You, the river
I, the rain


© Copyright 2002 Constance M. Lessard - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-24 07:43 PM



Ok, so I'm liking your work.  A lot.  
Do you have a book published?

Constance
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2 posted 2002-11-24 08:31 PM


Sunshine,

A very humble thank you. As it happens, I'm liking you right back!  No, no book--I've never dared to dream such a thing.  E me, if you like. Too much to say here. I send smiles, and thanks again.


jwesley
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3 posted 2002-11-24 09:13 PM


Wonderfully put, my friend.  Loved the way you tied the two together.

jwesley

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4 posted 2002-11-24 09:16 PM



Constance, check your E-mail.

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5 posted 2002-11-25 01:36 PM




(smiles) Oh Constance, this is so bautiful, sweet friend, this just has to be published as it is sooooo spiritually refreshing and romantic! (sigh) I love the confluence you make here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Constance, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-11-25 02:25 PM


Constance
Tied with a beautiful bow, enjoyed

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-11-25 03:15 PM



This style and content truly appeals to me. So much truth in its simplicity and economy of words.

Earth Angel

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