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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-24 03:04 PM


Ride Of Your Life

if you
are a ride
I will give you
the whole roll
of tickets
to sit
in the front seat
excitingly slide
through the curves
feeling all the bumps
losing my breath
heart in stop
no foot on brakes
let it go
let it fly
to the top
and beyond




I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-24-2002 03:32 PM).]

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RSWells
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1 posted 2002-11-24 04:32 PM


WEEEEEEE!!!!!
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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2 posted 2002-11-25 10:54 PM


Nice!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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3 posted 2002-11-25 11:43 PM


Front row tickets, eh?  Hang on!

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-11-25 11:45 PM


Well, Helen, this is very thought provoking.
I like it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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