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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-24 02:09 PM


The Lost Is Found

who is
this ordinary man
this ordinary man
that makes breathing
so extraordinary
a beat of heart
that echoes my own
who I miss in sleep
teaching me to believe
believe in magic
the magic of hope


I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 02:12 PM


Obviously Helen,  whoever he is...there is
nothing ordinary about him at all...At least
not for you..

Jamie Dawg
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2 posted 2002-11-24 02:27 PM


i can totally relate to this feeling of utter longing and need for closeness to a special person. you've put to paper a shared experience ina really touching way.

respectx jd

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3 posted 2002-11-24 07:00 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, if he can bring all that magic to your heart, he is no ordinary man, he is a saviour! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-24 09:22 PM


Very nice questionning, exploring another's essence, his heart beat.
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