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0 posted 2002-11-24 02:01 PM


The trees stand so tall
Going all through the canyon
As naked as can be

11-24-02

© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 02:14 PM


I loved this... Trees are awsome, thanks for posting this.

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2 posted 2002-11-24 06:58 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I love nature so much and may the trees always be perched with many bluebirds and sparrows singing pretty songs your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
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3 posted 2002-11-24 07:28 PM



Sue, This is good and very true with the trees around here. They are sooooo tall, they are naked, until you bend your head back, looking way up to see the beginning of the boughs....

Thanks for this...

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

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4 posted 2002-11-24 07:42 PM


Nicely written, Sue...I saw the picture in my mind...very creative...

...believe what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2002-11-24 08:34 PM


Very nice Sue!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

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6 posted 2002-11-24 08:39 PM


Sue, I must say you shine so well in the beautiful little works of these wonders.
Loved the read. ThisDiamond

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7 posted 2002-11-24 09:07 PM


This I love...been there, done that, lived and breathed it...all over again thanks to you..

jwesley

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8 posted 2002-11-24 10:18 PM


Great Sue!! Enjoyed. Chris

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that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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