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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-11-24 09:51 AM






“Don’t keep that…
       it’s a bad picture,
                it did not come out right.”

~*~

now, alone in my room
I look again,
and welcome

my muse.


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 09:54 AM


So,  this is how it is done?  Perhaps I
should break out my camera and see...

Nan
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2 posted 2002-11-24 10:08 AM


I happen to think it's a very good picture... a wonderful visage - One that provokes some thought.  The Sunshine's coming in.  I think I'll keep it..
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-11-24 10:26 AM


sunshine - and a great muse it is...

BC

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4 posted 2002-11-24 10:52 AM


Alone in my room...much is seen new.
regards2you
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5 posted 2002-11-24 11:00 AM




Karilea, This is a wonderful still
life,  (and that is with no fruit, said smiling) Look at light coming in from the right...I love plain and simple and I personally think there is nothing more appealing than a rocking chair and throw...conjures up all phases of life.

I forgot to look at your poem, tsk!
I'll go back and do that, but I believe it said throw this out....
no, no. no.....I like it!

PS...Am guessing it is a rocker..it is in my mind..

Warm regards, Pat  




..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (11-24-2002 11:02 AM).]

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-11-24 12:19 PM


My friend, there are no mistakes in nature!!
Bravo. ThisDiamond

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-11-25 06:31 AM


Our muses often visit us in many forms.
I like the picture, it reminds me of my grandmothers rocking chair that she sat in staring out the window all the time.
Maybe she was searching for her muse?
Lovely Kari.

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8 posted 2002-11-25 06:43 AM


hmmmmm... now that's word for thought!

Deb

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9 posted 2002-11-25 08:40 AM


Ohmygosh!  I must grab Wiz and show him this!
Amazing!  And a keeper of a picture!!!
~Morning hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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10 posted 2002-11-25 08:49 AM


Sunshine,

No fair! You lured your muse in with coziness! Smile. Lovely.

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11 posted 2002-11-25 03:40 PM



Ah, yes, I see your muse is as mysterious and lovely as you are! How fortunate that you have a picture of her!

EA

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12 posted 2002-11-25 04:04 PM


Boy do I have one

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

passing shadows
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13 posted 2002-12-14 03:48 AM


giggling
Kethry
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14 posted 2002-12-14 03:57 AM


I see your muse retains her air of mystery.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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15 posted 2002-12-19 01:25 PM


You're giving away tricks of the trade, I see.
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