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Does The Day Ever Come |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ How does a woman feel worthy After her man walks out on her Without an explanation as to why So many things run through her head You do all you can do each year To please him and make him happy Just to find out there was no way Or you never could do enough Sometimes his silence is far worse Then the words he has said Physical pain is just as bad Even though it does not last As long as the mental and emotional Does the day ever come When you start feeling good again And maybe think you are worthwhile This is something I do not know 11-24-02 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - yes, the day does come when you feel good again. It may take a while, but hang in there, it does come... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Knowing that you did all that you could... That is what matters most...And if he cannot accept that....or did not...that is his problem...because it takes two forgiving hearts to become one together in love.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick As they say what goes around comes around. Well done. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Somewhere out there is someone who would make it right again. Look ahead. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cast off the demons, theyre not worth it gutsy , and soulbearing poem |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
SmartChick...I see the growth in you and I like it. Writing about your feelings, and even wondering...is a step toward inner peace where soon, I hope, you'll be able to grab onto it; knowing that you've done your best and that is good enough. May God bless and give you both strength and wisdom to overcome. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the throws of all we are taught about life and the woman's role...it takes life to teach us that if everything is not good enough...it was not the sender, but the receiver that was off the hook. The worthwhile will come from inside, when we accept that forgiveness is love. Happy Thanksgiving my friend. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only you can find out...it's a spooky feeling...you'll be ok. So go explore darlin'! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
I agree with Soleil Noir. I know how you are feeling and yes, the day will come. I view everything I wrote back then as therapy--some day you will too. Well-written and honest. Hang in! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Nice write! Thanks for sharing. God bless! [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-24-2002 06:07 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sue, I know with all my heart you will feel well again, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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