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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-11-24 04:30 AM


If this is what you want believed,
accept the message as received.
Just look of me, square in the eye
and so, sober, kiss me goodbye.

Your weight, heavy, you wear it well.
I ask you honest, please do tell.
Share with me this burden by ...
to understand you, reasons why.

All that shows, frustrations that pour
feeding me want of seeing more.
No need for tears to feel the cry,
release yourself ... kiss me goodbye.

xx

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-11-24 06:08 AM


ctowen,
such a sad/angry goodbye. You painted the goodbye with with words of tears.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
2 posted 2002-11-24 07:01 AM


Crisp, clear message--well said!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-11-24 12:53 PM


that's hard...I'm with ya...I know.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-24 06:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, this is such a beautifully heartwrenching write, sweet friend, I hope all is well with you as I send many angel hugs out to all who have to face this uneasy task! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-24 10:48 PM


there could be no kiss any where to speak such words....so what if I just kissed ya hello?


bigggggg hugssssss


"T.O.ME."~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-11-24 11:09 PM


Well said Craig...very difficult indeed.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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