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kellinjar
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2002-11-23 10:29 PM


staring silently into oblivion, darkness
a quiet whisper, hoping for the sweet caress
a touch, a feeling of gentle hope
quiet, in the blackness I grope
a swallow, it sounds as though a thunder crash
a feeling adrift, left to burn to ash
you're gone, the touch withdrawn
left now, to only hope for the dawn
a touch, remembered as bliss
the gentle feeling, to reminisce
sitting now, my back against nothingness
wishing silently once again for your sweet caress

© Copyright 2002 Matthew Cross - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-11-25 06:33 AM


Sounds like a sweet dream to come true.  I enjoyed this.  Welcome to our Passions home, enjoy your time here.  
Sandpiper
Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
2 posted 2002-11-25 06:48 AM


Enjoyed!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-28 02:46 AM


Wow!
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