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Open Poetry #23

Gentle Reverie

kellinjar
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2002-11-23 10:27 PM

I close me eyes, I tell you how much I care
my minds eye traces the gentle lines of your hair
my chest slowly expands, I breathe you in
your scent drifts under my nose, pure without sin
my lip quivers, I remember your touch lightly on it
brushing gently across the skin, making me commit
my heart reverberates deep within my chest cavity
drawn towards you, locked within your gravity
my soul pulses within my being, feeling you close
touching my core, sweet love you did diagnose
the answer true, the cure for my dying spirit
say you love me true, for I wish indeed to feel it

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-11-24 12:53 PM

Enjoyed...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-11-24 06:32 AM

kellinjar,
this was very neatly done. I felt the softness of the mood.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-25 10:59 PM

Thanks for sharing.
God bless!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-25 11:02 PM

Mathew, I enjoyed reading this poem.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2002-11-27 02:55 AM

the title brought me in, I enjoyed the softness.

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