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Woman Of My Dreams (For My Joanna)
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Woman Of My Dreams (For My Joanna) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Dedicated to the love of my dreams, my Joanna! Yay!  )Woman Of My Dreams By: Noah Eaton 11/18/02 I dream of holding you Down on the milky eiderdown clouds Of our sweet moonlight dreams Lathering you in the satiny lotion of starlight Wrap me in your velvet Embrace me in your cashmere kiss Dance with me among the curried heavens Swimming among these eternal lovers tides We are ivory swans, flying in mutual harmony Embracing the kaleidoscope heart of paradise Dancing romantic ballet, finding grace in gravity Finding happiness in your angelic heart Hold my hand, sweet love You are the woman of my dreams Kiss me under these roman candle skies Shouting off fireworks of our felicity United in true love… You and me... Forever... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-23-2002 08:11 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - forever may you know of the love of your lady... BC |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That brought tears to my eyes. Jonna must love you sooo much. She is so lucky. You are a great guy Noah, thanks for sharing  Never be normal! |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I know before I read, there is this smile that believes. Such is my trust in your words. Thank you. etoodog |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Did it suddenly get warmer in here? Whew! Time for bed I think; with those images flowing through me I'm sure to have very pleasant dreams. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Noah! I'm sure Joanna will love this. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is pure poetry of romance, the kind most women would like to receive every once in a while, even from the silent types, but it really is hard to pull it out of them, you know? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Noah, you are such a romantic...these words will touch Joanna's heart.... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautifully romantic piece Noah ... filled with heart, warmth and love. Joanna is a lucky young lady, indeed!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your love and deep devotion for Joanna are so very evident throughout your words. I wish you much love and eternal happiness. "Love - bittersweet, irrepressible - loosens the limbs and I tremble" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, dear friend, this is really beautiful, and written only as you can, my friend. I'm glad that I went to the back pages and found it. I love to read your poems, especially the ones about you and Joanna. I can tell that the words come directly from your heart, sweet Noah. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah.. This is so touching & romantic. You and your Joanna share something very special, LOVE...Paul |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
what a helpless romantic you are....and that's a very good thing. A most soft and lovely write. Salty |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~sigh~ what a lucky gal to have you.....  Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah, I hope she appreciates you, for Love knows no distance. Keep the faith... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Love song, may your love last forever and always brighten your path. Thanks for sharing dear Noah (hugs)) Charisma |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh she'll treasure this for as long as she lives. it's so beautiful. but then its no suprise, as it was written by someone with a beautiful, forever giving and sharing heart. lots of love, gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You are the knight of romance. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Noah, Beautiful! And, these phrases: "eiderdown clouds" "Lathering you in the satiny lotion of starlight" "Cashmere kiss" and.... "Finding grace in gravity" Oh my, this is a lovely poem. I enjoyed it a great deal. Thanks for sharing with us... Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, this is so sweet and so touching. Joanna will just love it. One day those dreams will become reality. Hugs, Marti 'Don't give up. Moses was once a basket case...' |
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Bob Banger New Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 4 |
hello noah. i just wanted to say i very much enjoyed this romantic piece of literatecha. touched the heart it did indeed. Cheers for the good times, hows your father Bob banger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this one, Noah. You really float on a Love cloud. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, this is so descriptive and beautiful. You are pure of heart. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, you have more love, romance, and talent in your baby finger than most people have in their entire bodies! Reading your poetry, truly is an enchanting experience where all one's senses are aroused and titilated! You are a maestro conducting orchestrated poetic masterpieces! ~ May your heart and pen always be full of inspiration! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-30-2002 11:27 PM).] |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
It is sooooooooooo a sweet and romantic poem Noah I love it.  Muys [This message has been edited by Muys (12-01-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Ohh mistletoe, ohh mistletoe, You must know we love you so . Beautiful poem Noah, passionate, romantic and sweet . Thankyou, you have mage my heart smile, gentle friend . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Noah you're selflessness, cheerfulness and love is an inspiration to all of us here at PIP. |
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