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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-11-23 08:10 PM


“ONE MORE RAINBOW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If ever the morning mist caressed me,
and the cool breeze kissed my face,
the trees in the meadow would smile
with the softness of dawn's grace…

If ever the haze lifted with sun's rays,
and the clouds filled the tranquil sky,
the flowers would open to receive
life to warm them, and they would sigh…

If ever the rain spread out in harmony,
and my thoughts were filled with you,
I would see just one more rainbow,
because of, because of what you do...
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-23 08:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may her smile forever light your world and bring kisses and sunshine to your heart always! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-23 08:18 PM


Bill, that was so wonderfull. I love all of your sweet poems

Never be normal!

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-11-23 08:28 PM


Awwww Bill, this is beautiful!
jwesley
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4 posted 2002-11-23 10:24 PM


Yep...I understand Bill...neat write...

jwesley

regards2you
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5 posted 2002-11-23 10:32 PM




Bill,

This is pretty. I like the idea of flowers, sighing.....I also like the rest of the poem. Very, very nice.

Warm regards, Pat


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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-11-24 12:28 PM


Like this Bill...James
Kethry
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7 posted 2002-11-24 07:03 AM


Bill,
this is another winner.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-11-24 09:27 AM



Bill, this is lovely!  Thank you!

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9 posted 2002-11-24 10:01 AM


Bill,  you are growing more each poetic
day.  Your change in style is very nice..
Enjoy!!

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10 posted 2002-11-24 12:49 PM



ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-11-24 03:29 PM


Nicely done...wishes to you for the gold at the end of the rainbow. ThisDiamond
scorpio
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12 posted 2002-11-24 06:17 PM


I enjoyed this verse very much Bill...




Ivy Rose
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13 posted 2002-11-24 10:26 PM


Bill...There is such a beauty, a presence in your words. They always speak to the deep in my heart and my soul. I love this exquisite poem. What wealth of longing lingers... silently in the the very core of your being, in your heart.
Enchantress
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14 posted 2002-11-24 10:33 PM


Beautiful Bill....so very beautiful.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

sigheyes
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15 posted 2002-11-25 09:44 AM


Very lovely and enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by sigheyes (11-25-2002 09:54 AM).]

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16 posted 2002-11-25 09:53 AM


Simply dreamy Bill.  Loved this!
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17 posted 2002-11-25 04:01 PM


You speak of love in a manner that is uniquely your own--and I am swept away with the natural beauty of your images...

EA

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