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December's Tears
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December's Tears |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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stars shine in December, to fall, land without sound, the ground is littered with diamonds. I breathe and the air sighs, the snow begins to melt, rains softly, I become the snow, As the rain tricles through me, To the earth Is the ground dead, just asleep? This is what I ask the moon, glimmering innocently above, cushioned by clouds. seeds are sprouting inside of me, even in the winter. black birds fly, dark as the velvet sky, pillows of coldess But I am warm inside. if I said one word, you would not understand all that is left is music. another one of those things that don't have to make sense. It is just music, listen and if you read it again, I swear you can hear it.... Never be normal! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wind - your words carry from a heart to the wind. I understand all of them written here... Peace be with you... BC |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like your ending with music and felt your words packed a surprise in each line. Thank you. etoodog |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sounds can evoke great emotion, and music can take you anywhere you wish to go. Enjoyed the write, wind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I like it! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
beautiful indeed! "I am a sky where spirits live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wind...December is "my" month, but I have never seen it written so well... Thank you for this. It is in my library... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a beautful observation, totally tuned in to the heavens, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Read twice, thrice, into the infinite warmth and touch that this poem gives... As the winds caress within your words... Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wind My wind charm plays your song, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The style of your magnificent gift takes my breath away. A signature perfection. ThisDiamond |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thank you for all of your kind, wonderfull replys. I appreciate your reading my poetry  Never be normal! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Liz, the spring is my favorite time of year so I always try and think of spring in November or December and imagine baby bluebirds singing and they always make me happy inside and I hear the music myself! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, always follow the melody of your golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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