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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-11-23 07:41 PM


God where are you?(!!!!!!!!!!)

Can you hear me scream?

Why do I feel so alone?

Will the truth ever be shown?

I ask you for how can I argue your cause?

THEN I PAUSE.......

As I see my reflection on the glass
of a mirror as I pass
for it is then I realize
we are your truth


ugly as we can become
our beauty cannot be undone
It is your image we are made in
even if we are born in original sin

So again you have answered me
without a burning bush
Just a simple mental push

in the direction I needed
now my way is unimpeded
so I step in the right direction
thanks to your loving affection.

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (11-23-2002 07:45 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
1 posted 2002-11-24 10:47 AM



We are your truth.

~*~

Very good.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
2 posted 2002-11-24 11:00 AM


yep, I like that line "we are your truth"

reminds me of my recent senyru and the revelation within it

enjoyed this, once we got past the agony of despair into your own revelation

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-25 10:56 PM


Enjoyed!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2002-11-26 03:45 AM


Thomas...Your words ring so true in this soulful poem...Paul
A2J
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since 2002-11-22
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South Africa
5 posted 2002-11-26 04:34 AM


Enjoyed very much
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