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Letting you down.
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Letting you down. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Caverns of past, Tunnels of anxiety, You pass through each inch, Understanding the nonsense of me. Guiltily confused, Overflowing regret, I question my importance, Foolish to let you down. So i'm digging and building, To get out of this circle, That deflates my motivation, And buries all you give. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I like this. I like the style and the content. Maybe you can write your way out of the circle...  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou for your kind words Duncan. You hit the nail on the head, I (slowly) am writing myself out of the circle ,feeling better all the time. Writing is the most effective therapy in the world! thankyou again, love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I love this...especially the last stanza! Write it out...keep writing. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
a therapeutic write...good for the soul...write to right yourself, Gemma.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I felt this way just tonight...I'm trying to forget about it... |
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