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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-11-23 11:44 AM


10:54am
almost time to be the rest of a work herd
and here I am pounding at this keyboard
like writing is the last addiction I'm allowed now.
It is
isn't it?
These words are the only thing that hold a calming effect.
Perhaps they'll bring the tears that refuse to come.
So I'm juggling emotion.
relief, fear, and uncertainty.
I should be on my feet
in the car with its rubber
pounding away in circular
at an oblivious cold road;
but here I am
late again
but needing to say I'm sorry
for not saying "I Love You"
before you left.


Sorry..everyone..I shouldn't even be writing such crap, but the need to express took over for now.

~~I Love You~~

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2002-11-23 11:49 AM


Don't ever apologize for emoting, it's what seperates you from the herd. If you want to apologize apologize for calling this crap, I wish I could express myself as well as you do. Beautiful words as always.
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2002-11-23 02:30 PM



there really is no better catharsis than writing if thats whats inside you begging to get out,,,,,,,,,dont stop now!!!!!!!

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-11-23 03:16 PM


Jenn...don't ever apologize for letting your feelings come through...
for then you would be apologizing for the truth.
I love the way you express youself.
Write on sweet poetess!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Moonlight Romeo
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4 posted 2002-11-25 12:25 PM


Sometimes, we remember to forget, so that we can remember when we have forgetten.  There are times, where we remember, and then, when we think that we have forgotten, we get another chance.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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5 posted 2002-11-25 01:20 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Jennifer, never...I mean NEVER...apologize for expressing the beautiful person you are, for the best poetry is always that which comes from the heart, and if there is one thing I hate more than anything in the world, it is lying! You are one of the most genuine poets I know and that is why I always love reading you and you are a special friend to me! (sigh) My heart goes out to you and I wish nothing but the joy you are so deserving of for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-11-26 02:17 PM


It's honest.
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