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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-11-22 11:16 PM

In a billion stars
Your eyes reached out
Into the winds of the moon’s tide
You stood over your universe
In all its magnificent splendor
With the fireworks of a meteor shower

In silken wings of a night butterfly
Swirling so wildly erotic
In the innocence of purity
Dancing in harmony with nature
Yet creating your own music

In the softness of a pool of rainbows
The fabric of living affixed to you
Pieces magnetically creating your aura
In a fashion that intoxicates passion
As the bare feet of an angel cast her spell

Standing afar, I watched the light show
Glued to the fragrance of desires
Dance my fairy princess
Into the night of my heart
For you have captured me
In your total perfection

On the clouds of fantasies
My feeling have melted into the night
As the winds started to decline
Wrapping you up into a cocoon
Falling into the awaiting swells

A lonely tear appeared
To an even lonelier heart
As the golden rays
Blinded my mind
Looking away in pain
A transparent material
Floated before me

I awake the night skies
Looking for a dream
Of a silhouette dancing
As a butterfly
On moon beams

D.Lester Young 11/21/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-11-23 12:20 PM

Very nice. I see the lights dance for you too.

Yet the ending of your dance seems too sudden, as it leaves you in darkness, alone.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-11-23 12:00 PM

This is beautiful and I enjoyed it a great deal. Very well written.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2002-11-23 02:15 PM

ooooooh very much enjoyed.
In a billion stars
Your eyes reached out
Into the winds of the moon’s tide
You stood over your universe
In all its magnificent splendor
With the fireworks of a meteor shower.
perfect!
lots of love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-11-23 04:52 PM

Poetic perfection!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-11-23 05:55 PM

I know I've already posted to this, but was re-reading and I really, really like this. It is a masterpiece!
I don't know why you don't get more response to your poetry for I find it excellent. Maybe because you don't post on other's poems. At least I've not seen you do it.

Again, this is special....

Thanking you for sharing it,

Warm Regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-11-24 12:32 PM

One of your best...enjoyed...James

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