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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-11-22 07:24 PM


You just stood there bare
except for your big
stupid grin.
How could I not
let you in
even knowing how
badly it would end?
So once again I saw
your true backside
slinking away
early the next day.
Sister Eve stood there
and laughed,
for she understood.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-11-22 07:31 PM


You crack me up!  Think it's your resiliency that works for ya, Kacy.  And maybe figuring out how to recognize those snakes...from the front!!!  
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2 posted 2002-11-22 07:38 PM


LOL. Maybe it's time for me to go look for a teddy bear instead of a snake?
jwesley
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3 posted 2002-11-22 10:20 PM


funny how those vipers always slither their way in...through open doors, hmmm?

Loved the witty write here, my friend.

jwesley

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4 posted 2002-11-22 10:23 PM


This is very cute, Kacy...
I hate snakes... but love teddy bears (I'm married to one)  so go for the teddy bear, they are much sweeter
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-11-22 10:53 PM


jwesley, thank you for your tenderness.

Lyra, so happy to see you here tonight! Yes, teddy bears are lots more cuddly.

But I still like snakes too, for some strange reason.

bbent
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6 posted 2002-11-23 03:26 AM


You want to go charmin snakes you got to expect a bite once in a while...lol,Good write,hope you find that love you deserve in life.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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7 posted 2002-11-23 10:15 AM


LOL, hey Ray, thanks for the visit. Yep, best to be prepared for a bite now and then.
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8 posted 2002-11-23 07:45 PM




(giggles in delight) If you get yourself a stuffed mongoose, no snake will dare to come near! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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9 posted 2002-11-23 09:09 PM


ROTFL, Noah, now why would I want to go and do that? A mongoose, huh?
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