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Auguste
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By the sea


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Crescent, ivory moon, please light
upon frail brow of trembling thoughts,
that can't connect, only collect,
as petals, dead, strewn on the ground.

Winter is death, I know its chill,
as rigormortis tries set in,
but oh, the days along the glen,
wildflower picking in the rain.

How fun it was to sit and dream,
of what we hoped life would contain.
Our clothes were soaked and we so laughed
and kissed 'til morning came again.
© Copyright 2002 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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very soft..and very good... I enjoyed this one a great deal.. quite romantic..

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(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiuflly romantic, sweet friend, this brought a huge smile to my face as I dream so very much of singing in the rain with my Joanna and making her so very happy and feel special and loved! (big hugggsssss) I wish happiness to always rain upon you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Michael,

I only want to
tell you how carefree
and happy this sounds.

Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Michael - lovely write dear poet. Yet...bittersweet. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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This is delightful, Michael...
Oh how lovely it would be to have those days back again
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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6 posted 11-22-2002 10:55 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Wonderful Michael!
Much enjoyed the read tonight.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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Quite a good memory, and a great read.
Thanks for all your kind encouragement.
ThisDiamond
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oh yeah, memory lane here...*sigh*
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Enjoyed...james
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romantic rain,
in the background of his first kiss,
never forgotten
this brings it back again,thanks
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Sweet memories conjured up after reading this...beautiful. Michael..

...believe what your heart feels...

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Auguste
Well done enjoyed the read.
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Michael...the sweetest love is sometimes the memory.  This was beautiful!
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A truly beautiful write...even though it
was a little on the damp side...

Thank You Michael...this one surely must
be special for you..
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This is a very emotional composition. It makes you feel all warm and happy inside. A remarkable read, pure love.

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

Auguste
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16 posted 11-24-2002 03:13 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Everyone, thank you all so much.  I wish I had time to respond to you individually, but today I'm very rushed and won't be able spend much time online.   Your responses mean more to me than you know.   Thank you!
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hehe.....here I thought walking in the rain was awesome.....but kissing.....
what could be more perfect?  Loved this one m'friend.
Sudhir Iyer
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Excellent imaging... could see it all...

Regards to you,
Sudhir
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19 posted 11-27-2002 09:43 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Lovely write, enjoyed it very much

Charisma
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20 posted 11-27-2002 01:43 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Michael, I sure do like this idea, with my Gary, of course.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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