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Open Poetry #23

Inside of me

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2002-11-22 04:39 PM

Inside of Me
Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings that I can no longer hide.
They are for that special girl,
The one that I care for and I adore.

I don’t know how I can make her see,
That if we were together it would be destiny.
It’s not like I can’t tell,
Because when I’m around her my heart begins to swell.

She is everything I could possibly want and need,
Yet to her together we will never be.
I really love her with all my heart and soul,
As my emotions continue to flow.

Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings I can no longer hide.
They belong to that one special girl,
The one I care so much for and adore.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-22 05:30 PM

Very nicely done, and I think you should tell her too!

What can you loose?

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-11-24 04:24 AM

Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
God bless!

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-11-09 05:16 PM

AWWW...!
so cute. I mean...yeah cute.lol. Not to affend you or anything. Well I thought this poem could be a little better, Gosh! j/k your poem is very good. Probly better then mine. man I hate you. j/p. I don't even know you. but w/e. i hope to see more from you in the future. Thanx for sharing with us.

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