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Inside of me

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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 11-22-2002 04:39 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04


Inside of Me
Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings that I can no longer hide.
They are for that special girl,
The one that I care for and I adore.

I donít know how I can make her see,
That if we were together it would be destiny.
Itís not like I canít tell,
Because when Iím around her my heart begins to swell.

She is everything I could possibly want and need,
Yet to her together we will never be.
I really love her with all my heart and soul,
As my emotions continue to flow.

Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings I can no longer hide.
They belong to that one special girl,
The one I care so much for and adore.
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1 posted 11-22-2002 05:30 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Very nicely done, and I think you should tell her too!   What can you loose?  

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Radrook
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2 posted 11-24-2002 04:24 AM       View Profile for Radrook   Email Radrook   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Radrook

Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
God bless!
cherrys_rule
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3 posted 11-09-2006 05:16 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

AWWW...!
so cute. I mean...yeah cute.lol. Not to affend you or anything. Well I thought this poem could be a little better, Gosh! j/k your poem is very good. Probly better then mine. man I hate you. j/p. I don't even know you. but w/e. i hope to see more from you in the future. Thanx for sharing with us.
 
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