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Closer |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Closer The way you want Closer the way you see Closer The way you want to be with Close to your heart Closer to your love Closer At night Closer to you Closer the morning whisper Just want to be closer to you All the time Closer this way Every day Closer with the time Don't want time go by This way We can make this love Strong Let the love stay for longer Closer Closer to see The way you love Closer to be with you Closer you see The day turns Into night Closer You see the daylight Closer No matter Where our love leads to..... Closer Everytime We get closer Where our hearts belongs to Closer To feel the touch Of your hand Your hand In mine [This message has been edited by vandana (11-22-2002 04:31 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heard music behind these words...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vandana, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish for this happiness to become brighter to you each day and for you and your love to be together forever! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I agree... I heard music here.. I enjoyed |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Repetition for emphasis par exellence! God bless! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it is a nice feeling to be so close, one that I have not felt in awhile, but at least I can share it through your poetry |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
V. Closer is something we all desire...and I do believe you have felt this feeling... As well as have written it well... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I like the way you wrote this poem and put emphasis on the title. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, this was an awesome poem...thanks for the read Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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