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Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-11-22 12:19 PM



Oh my mighty Knight
How I wish to ask you stay
But my warrior can’t fight for me
Just for the lands new right way

In the very pit of me
I feel a pending doom
Mention not of this to you
For it’s not for you it looms

I watch your crossing
Last sight of thee twill be
Glance back just once with blue eyes
For strength twill give to me

I fear not what they’ll do to me
For in the end it’s freedoms death
Speaking only of our love
Will pass my lips in my last breath

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-11-22 12:58 PM


Complications can be an aching void...nice write. ThisDiamond
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-11-22 01:16 PM


so softly beautiful....
Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-24 04:21 AM


Beautiful!
Enjoyed!
God bless!

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