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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-22 10:14 AM


Breathing DEEP


all I need
is surrounded by
four walls
my second chance
loneliness evaporates
sneaking under doors
and out window cracks
leaving me
with a breath
I can breathe


I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-11-22 10:18 AM


1slick_lady
Good one, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-11-22 11:15 AM


breathe deep... and let it out slowly...

enjoyed

kaile
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3 posted 2002-11-22 11:40 AM


hi helen,
good one...a good friend asked me not so long time ago, "how many second chances do you think we get in life?" and i was left wondering about how do we ever know that our first chances are wasted...Hmmm

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4 posted 2002-11-22 03:50 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may you always find that special place to breathe deep in the heart of joy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

jwesley
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5 posted 2002-11-22 10:17 PM


Enjoyed 1slick...Second chances, huh?  I tend to believe they're all first chances...can only be a second chance if EVERYTHING IS EXACTLY THE SAME as the first chance...fat chance of that...

jwesley

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