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the chair that you sat in
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the chair that you sat in |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I sit in the chair that you sat in delighted that you were once there I gaze at the sun's play-pattern directing my eyes through the glare. The arms of the chair, they surround me. I remember the sky of your eyes. I sit in the chair that you sat in. I let myself drift in my mind. The touch of my lips, first--on your cheek, and then the sun burst-- surprisingly sweet. Familiar and old as ancient's orb greet. I sit in the chair that you sat in. I pray for the next time we meet. Tell me I don't really feel it. Tell me that it's all a lie. And still I will sit here beguiling myself with a memory's eye. The touch of your lips, the last on my cheek-- my only regret was watching you leave... fingernails trailing themselves on my knee-- I sit in the chair that you sat in, pretending that you're still with me. *repost/reworked from open 13* [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-22-2002 03:44 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 serenity, this breaks my heart. a fine write! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Senerity~ Very emotional thoughts. Enjoyed very much...Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Karen, I'm happy this is a re-post as this is so very sad and hope doesn't currently relate to you, sweet friend, you always express yourself so well with such charisma in your talent! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much You have such a beautiful heart sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This deserves to be in an anthology, or, better yet, a full-length book. |
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