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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-11-21 09:10 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

Waves of desire wash over me
As I stand so close to you
We search the far horizon
Across a sea of sapphire blue

But today I see just one thing
Only you, and you alone
Since you came into my life
How my love for you has grown

You tilt my head towards you
And kiss my lips so tenderly
Just as the sun starts setting
Far out across the sea

You whisper words of love
As our fingers interlace
I gently trace around your mouth
As I study your handsome face

The water laps our ankles
As your arms envelop me
You are the centre of my universe
My sun, my moon, my sea

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-11-21 09:31 PM


SueTang~
Absolutely enchanting~
You do the term Poetess proud~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2002-11-21 10:33 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may true love always be the sun in your universe making you feel special wherever you go! (kiss on cheek) Yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-21 10:36 PM


Ah Sue!!  This is so special...so perfect.
And I love the series of pictures by this artist.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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4 posted 2002-11-21 10:44 PM


Oh, Sue....sooooo  beautiful!!!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-11-23 04:25 AM


Beautiful...James
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2002-11-23 11:59 AM




this is quite heavenly..........
romantic poetry at its best

CloudedDreams
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7 posted 2002-11-23 04:04 PM


This is so wonderful...the work casts a romantic spell on the reader. It is a work of a great poetress.
Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-11-23 04:06 PM



This is lovely, Sue, picture AND poem...

gemjop
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9 posted 2002-11-23 04:59 PM


sigh.....you paint pictures in my mind, that are even more colourful than the picture you posted. thanks.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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