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free bird... but what about the pen?
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free bird... but what about the pen? |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Free Like A Bird I hide away from life, I think I always have. In my room of solitude is where I live. Away from the glare of conditional love. I would be happy to be a bird that lives with the wind free from things that grasp, but thinking on this... how would I use my pen? BloomingRose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Just paint yourself wings and believe you can fly! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ha, being a fellow birdie-wannabe, i confess i have never thought about your ending lines before...i guess we should learn to be contented with what we have?  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
to live among them if just for a day... break through this cage and just fly away another birdlover |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If you want to write, I'm sure you'd find a way....feathers make great 'quill pens'!! Good poem.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BloomingRose - your pen is well, keep writing. Your thoughts of free compelling... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
another love of the feathered kind here...raise my own too....kind of an enigma isn't it...guess you just have to write your dreams, huh?? Neat thoughts here... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a thought! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Deb, aye, there's the rub! But then again, perhaps you could put the pen in your beak! tehe I believe I understood where you were coming from with this poem. Beautifully expressed. ~ warm hugs, dear one! Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thanks for all the warm replies. I think when I wrote this one it was just- "one of those days". Hugs, Deb |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BloomingRose - free as a bird to write with a pen that writes words as these... BC |
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