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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Neglect Swirls like strong winds Along cold fronts Crazing with patterned frost Morning. The loose frown Drawn between your brows Clouds you look at me, And we’ll chase the storm I see brewing just behind The meaning in your eyes to see if the curl of high pressure leaves us stranded |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Smiling, wryly... thank you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wryly? Sybil the reply intrigues me but then again... perhaps there is more in a wry smile than in a hundred words. |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Think more in line at the word "neglect" showing one's stubbornness in leaving another stranded... Always enjoy your words. Always. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, Capt...sometimes more can be seen in the eyes, than can be heard from words. I enjoyed reading. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) I think perhaps my mind clouded this AM... for wry smiles and added words still leave me fogged in... there are several ways to look at anything it seems. thanks for the clarifications.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
garysgirl... thanks for dropping in...appreciate the words |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron: A wonderful kind of love, willing to stand side by side, helping to weather a storm, brewing. Recognizing the pattern and being the lightening rod rather than the lightening. Enjoyed this a great deal, and I can see other implications. But, I'll stick to the above and keep it simple. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks for dropping by Pat... appreciate your comments and glad you enjoyed |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ron...as always, well "crafted". Smile....though not wry; more like bourbon. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bob... a drop of Bourbon over ice is good for you once in while. the 'crafted" is almost a cookie cutter isn't it... sometimes it gets pretty boring reading my own stuff, I'm too predictable. Appreciate your dropping in.. always good to hear from you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a metaphor of great sagacity such a lesson to be learned in the cause and effect of a storm in a relationship Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
thanks VAS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...I love the way you write. Could read you for hours.... ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank you Nancy... I would think you might get bored however reading my scribblings for hours... I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a few words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooo! I have seen this warning before...sucksta be you...well, at least till you get Florida summer weather back again |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron It is not always easy to predict the weather, or the meaning behind a frown. I like the way you often use weather or nature to enhance the human connections you speak of. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
"Neglect" "look at me" those 2 lines are the essence...the 'spark' that fuels the rest of the poem... to me anyway.....and the rest is as martie says the wonderful way you use nature to give voice to our emotions |
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