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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-11-21 08:27 AM



~*~

Alabaster skin,
Face delicately defined
~ Dresden doll divine.

~*~

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-21-2002 09:46 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-11-21 08:36 AM


Linda, I loved it. You do these so well and say so much in just a few words.

(Maybe one day I'll learn what the difference is between these nice little Japanese verses...I thought my little series was haiku's, but after the comments, I changed the titles to "Japanese Verses", like you called them. I figured that would work.....)


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-21-2002 08:39 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-11-21 08:39 AM


Earth Angel
Well done, good read.

Sybil
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3 posted 2002-11-21 08:43 AM



Blushing cheeks on fire
Bluest eyes match silk of dress
Dresden lady, smile

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-11-21 08:52 AM



Linda:

That's pretty, pretty...(said smiling)

You don't run out of ideas, do you?

Love this one.

Hugs, Pat

  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-11-21 08:55 AM


Applause!
ThisDiamond

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-11-21 10:55 AM


Ethel  ~

I have been enjoying your "short Japanese verses"! tehe --very much, I might add!

(Just a little reminder, haikus are STRICTLY on nature, although senryus may have some references to nature as well.)

Good morning hugs to you!
Linda


Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-11-21 10:59 AM


Mr. T.  ~

I am pleased you enjoyed my little itty- bitty, teeny-weeny, tiny piece of poetry!

EA

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8 posted 2002-11-21 11:01 AM


Sybil  ~

"Bluest eyes match silk of dress"---I absolutely love that line! Perfect!

Thank you!

Earth Angel

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9 posted 2002-11-21 11:08 AM


Pat ~

I literally have a passion for writing these. I recently wrote 33 of them in one afternoon! It was as if the floodgates of creativity opened up and I channelled them all! hehe ---if only it was always that easy!

~ may your day be a good one!

Linda

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10 posted 2002-11-21 11:11 AM


ThisDiamond  ~

"Applause"---Thank you! Thank you! One and all. I would like to thank.... tehe
Curtain drops. Earth Angel exits with a big smile on her face!

EA

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11 posted 2002-11-21 09:14 PM


You do these so well.
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12 posted 2002-11-21 10:30 PM


Like pure white chocolate
Her smile melts my hearts candle
Making of Midas



(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Linda, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, this is a gorgeous poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2002-11-21 10:39 PM


Lovely....perfectly lovely!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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14 posted 2002-11-22 09:16 AM




SUPERB!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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15 posted 2002-11-22 03:08 PM


Lovely, Earth Angel!

Cor

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16 posted 2002-11-25 09:09 AM


Sue  ~  

I appreciate you saying so!--and I have noticed that you yourself have been delving into the waters of short Japanese poems and doing a wonderful job at writing them!
Thank you!

~ Here's to both of us stretching our poetic wings!

Linda

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17 posted 2002-11-25 09:16 AM


Noah  ~

Oh, no! You mentioned the "C"-word (chocolate) in your deliciously sweet senryu!
Sunshine and VAS really had me going there for awhile with their "C"-word poems. I love white chocolate, milk chocolate, dark chocolate--even sugar-free Baker's chocolate!
Darnation, here I go again, craving some of the "C"-word and all I have is protein power drink in that delicious flavor. As I have done before, I'm heading to the kitchen to get a "C" fix--albeit no where near as satisfying as a box of the real stuff! tehe

~ May your dreams always be as sweet as you are!

Linda


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18 posted 2002-11-25 09:19 AM


Enchantress  ~  That was a "lovely" reply!
Thank  you!
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VAS  ~  Does that mean you liked it?!? tehe
THANK YOU!
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Corinne  ~  I appreciate you reading and replying! "Lovely" is such a lovely word!
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~ May your lives be as picture perfect as a Dresden doll

Linda

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