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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-11-21 01:34 AM


Silently

Resting not on night so long
Day return seeking to belong
Gaze into the empty morning
Finding lost days frustrating

Seek do I happiness
Lyrics from hymms long ago sung
Frightened of sorrow listening
Wanting to see butterfly progress

I shall not dare return
To yesteryear's eons
But I can yearn for freedom
In the light of the falling moon

Webs I gathered from nests
Frost turning to dew falling
Seek I to cry or rest
Awaiting for the rainbow's crest

Calmly I sit nearby the levee
Water flow pass my mind's melee
Come to me heaven
Come reach me the broken

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2002-11-21 07:18 AM


Beautifully aching. Full of hope.Did you get inside my head when you wrote that?! ha ha. I can identify with each yearning sentence.
"Come to me heaven
Come reach me the broken"  This poem feels as if it should be a prayer, so special, it says what all of us feel at some point in our lives.
Lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2002-11-22 04:05 PM




life happens
when we are busy making
other plans...........

j.lennon......
sometimes the wait is sweeter than the prize

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-22 04:08 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Such tears fills your words, sweet friend,  hope everything is alright as my thoughts are with you and I send angel hugs of hope your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana
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4 posted 2002-11-22 04:08 PM


enjoy your read
A2J
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5 posted 2002-11-22 05:12 PM


really loved the poem
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2002-11-23 01:04 AM


that's kind of sad...but good
passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-14 02:30 PM


makes me want to come sit with you there....
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