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kayjay
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0 posted 2002-11-20 07:17 PM


Car died
I cried
No ride
Must bide

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

© Copyright 2002 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-11-20 08:23 PM


*s....my car does that to me too
Robert Adamson
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2 posted 2002-11-20 09:10 PM


Lol. Thank you.

etoodog

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3 posted 2002-11-20 09:20 PM


Yep, I know what you mean !!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-11-20 10:24 PM


Don't ya just hate when that happens Ken?
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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5 posted 2002-11-20 10:30 PM


reminds me of when i totalled my car.

i was stuck taking the bus.  that wasn't fun.

but neither was crashing your brand new car.

oh well.

heh.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

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6 posted 2002-11-20 10:47 PM


oh yuh
yuh

kayjay
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7 posted 2002-11-21 09:48 AM


A humble thanks to all for your kind remarks KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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