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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-11-20 04:46 PM



Parallel Lives

Two hearts began lifes' journey
Different paths on different days.
Never crossing come what may
On parallel course ordained by destiny.

And events did conspire
With kismet the hearts converged.
A romance passion surged
Lives once parallel met in fire.



[This message has been edited by scorpio (11-21-2002 07:38 AM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2002-11-20 04:59 PM


I've always like this title and concept.  It's great when they come together rather than ricochet off each other...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (11-20-2002 06:57 PM).]

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-11-20 05:17 PM


Scorpio~Much enjoyed your 500th post!
Very very nicely penned.
It is amazing how two people can lead parallel lives..
then one day meet, and it's magic,
When this happens it surely is Kismet.
Congratulations on becoming a Senior Member!
It's our pleasure having you here at Passions.
~Smiles, Hugs & Cheers, Nancy Lee~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-11-20 06:13 PM


very nicely done... I agree with Mark here..
gemjop
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4 posted 2002-11-20 06:14 PM


thats so beautiful. thats all i can say.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-20 07:05 PM


CONGRATULATIONS
Scorpio
on your 500th posts. I'm glad that you
like it here, because I really enjoy
reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing
your talents with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

majnu
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6 posted 2002-11-20 07:17 PM


it a pleasant read.

i must however point out how annoying the general usage of kismet is.

it is not pronounced kiss-met, but rather kissmut. it is simply a translation of fate and the usage of this word is unjustified unless you are trying to invoke eastern cultures, philosphy, or ambiance.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

scorpio
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7 posted 2002-11-20 10:50 PM


Glad you enjoyed the poem, Mark...it has been in the works for a few weeks..

Thank you for noticing my 500th post, sweet Enchantress...whether it's kismet or just plain magic when two lives merge into love it's wonderful...it's truly a gift...I'm fortunate to have crossed lines with a beautiful lady who makes my heart soar..

Cpat Hair...I 'm very glad you read and commented on this poem...thank you..

Gemma, thank you...glad you enjoyed it..

Ethel, thanks...yes I like it here...and I'll hang around for a while..

Thanks for the pronouncer and define of the word "kismet", Majnu...the dictionary had that too...sorry my use of it annoyed you...but the lady who I wrote it for loved it...and I value her happiness...

...believe what your heart feels...

Sybil
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8 posted 2002-11-21 08:22 AM



Kis"mut" may be the way
Kismet is said this day
seems to me it may be fey
to pronounce it others' way

as long as heart of one should hear
that which you have placed so dear
upon the pages in the blue
for she indeed heard the heart of you

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-11-21 08:30 AM


scorpio
Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

scorpio
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10 posted 2002-11-21 08:43 AM


Sybil...thank you..glad you agree...it meant something special to someone very special...

Sy...thank you for reading and your kind comments...it meant a lot to me

...believe what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-11-21 11:06 PM


Scorpio...so pleased I found this!
Forgot to pop it into my library!
Sorry to bother you.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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12 posted 2002-11-21 11:08 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Scorpio, this is sooooooooo beautiuflly sensual, sweet friend, yay, CONGRATULATIONS ON 500+, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
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13 posted 2002-11-22 07:43 AM


Enchantress..I'm honoured that you added "Parallel Lives" to your library...thank you so much..

Thank you, Noah...I look forward to your responses...you always brighten my day...thanks for your support.

passing shadows
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14 posted 2002-12-14 04:25 AM


awesome write! Loved the rhyme scheme!
scorpio
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15 posted 2002-12-14 08:55 AM


Thank you, Passing Shadows....I appreciate your reading of my poem and your comments...

believe in what your heart feels...

inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2002-12-14 04:24 PM


true romance,
paralel, but crisscrossing at the point of loves discovery

scorpio
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17 posted 2002-12-14 04:56 PM


Exactly...the convergence is magical...inkedgoddess, thank you for your comments..
JamesMichael
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18 posted 2002-12-15 02:37 AM


Enjoyed...James
scorpio
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19 posted 2002-12-15 10:32 AM


Thank you, James....I'm glad you enjoyed it..

believe in what your heart feels...

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