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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-11-20 12:07 PM



weakening,
a myst in the fade,
to reign no more

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-11-20 12:37 PM


enduring
stone erodes
slowly
foundations
last


moonflower
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2 posted 2002-11-20 12:44 PM


i
wish
to
be
the
wind

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-11-20 01:00 PM


enduring
stone erodes
slowly
foundations
last

~~*~~

short-lived
crumblings
deteriorating foundations

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-20-2002 01:01 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-11-20 01:04 PM


i
wish
to
be
the
wind

and
generate
strength




MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2002-11-20 01:13 PM


Know myself...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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6 posted 2002-11-20 01:17 PM


(chuckling)....

Even faded
impressions
remain
beauty


nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-11-20 01:17 PM


Know myself...


I Am...

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2002-11-20 01:21 PM


All.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2002-11-20 01:23 PM


(chuckling)....

Even faded
impressions
remain
beauty


(~smiling~)
subdued
and
pressure marked:
stunner

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2002-11-20 01:25 PM


All


Whole



MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2002-11-20 01:30 PM


...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2002-11-20 01:33 PM


..


(haa)

MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2002-11-20 02:52 PM


.

Check mate.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2002-11-20 04:00 PM




( )

dotless


uhuh..I figured this one out ahead of time
you just can't see what is between the  parenthesis

M

MARK V SHELDON
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15 posted 2002-11-20 04:50 PM


I concede...  you win.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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16 posted 2002-11-20 04:55 PM



"("

Existentialist contemplation
of the sound of one
driven by the nothing
inside

nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2002-11-20 05:46 PM


ok you guys... you crack me up
and I don't think Kit has made a smilie for that so I will just
to you

M

moonflower
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18 posted 2002-11-20 06:19 PM


nakedthoughts..i apologise for ruining your game..i didnt know it was a game..i feel really dumb and stupid..i thought it meant write a poem with 10 words or less..im really sorry i messed it up...next time ill watch a while and see the way its played before jumping in...sorry

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

nakdthoughts
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19 posted 2002-11-20 06:35 PM


you didn't ruin it at all..it didn't start out as a game..these guys sometimes just are so bored at work they decide to play "who can outdo one another"   I added to yours and if you want to you can take that one and add another less then 10 to it and I will be glad to do a few with you or maybe someone else will join in.
I liked yours very much...after awhile you will get use to certain poets who enjoy using their talents (not I, I just try to keep up with them)and are very playful on  here.

hugssssss
M

oh...and sometimes the ten or less just means we wrote a poem containing that amount of words..Blame it on Mark Sheldon, I believe he started this craze  

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-20-2002 06:39 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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20 posted 2002-11-20 06:56 PM


(That's:  Mark V Sheldon... )

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

nakdthoughts
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21 posted 2002-11-20 08:02 PM


you are just lucky I spelled Sheldon correctly, I hadn't at first ...  

is there another Mark Sheldon?  that you have to use the V

MARK V SHELDON
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22 posted 2002-11-20 09:26 PM


Indeed there is...  He's a dj on a local classical station (I'm flattered, but pleasantly resentful... ).

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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