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Open Poetry #23

Good to see you again....

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-20 08:37 AM

On that first day,
So naive,
You in the middle,
I on the edge,
Fresh and young,
I never did know,
So many years later,
Foe would be friend,
And lover again,
Laughing to the brim,
Eyes hold wonderous tears,
Turn off the light,
So i don't see you cry,
It's all alright love,
I'm sorry too.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-20-2002 08:40 AM).]

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

1 posted 2002-11-20 08:42 AM

This is quite beautiful in its honesty!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-11-20 09:36 AM

what seems to be along story told with a few words... nicely done

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-20 09:48 AM

"foe would be friend"

I like that concept, as well as the entire poem.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-11-20 09:51 AM

This is a gem of a write...
thank you, and Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2002-11-20 10:44 AM

Thankyou for your generous replies, any comments you make are important to me, much love to all you talented , diverse people.
Gemma xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-12-26 03:44 AM

bittersweet, yeah, I think.

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